Update 02_1_shoebox_p1.md

Author: gaudi369

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-## Double click on the Grasshopper canvas to search for components. Type in "Panel". Click and drop the Panel onto the canvas. 
+## Place your first component.
+Double click on the Grasshopper canvas to search for components. Type in "Panel". Click and drop the Panel onto the canvas. 
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-## Plugin libraries and functions are loacted on the top bar. Once you are familiar, this is an alternative place to drag and drop components from. 
+## Plugin libraries and functions are located on the top bar. 
+This is an alternative place to drag and drop components from. 
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-## Hide Lines in the hourly plot
+## Hide lines in the hourly plot
 Right click the center of the Hourly Plot component and click the option to "Hide Preview". Then connect the indicated outputs to a "Custom Preview" component. Note how this removes the grid lines from the original plot. Custom Previews can be used to modify your plots.
 
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 Hover over the center of the other two plot components on your Grasshopper canvas to read about them. 
 
-## Create Wind Rose and Sun Path Visualizations
+## Create Wind Rose and Sun Path visualizations
 The _location input takes values from the _location output of your Inport EPW component. The _wind_direction input takes values from the _wind_direction component. The _data component takes values from the **take better picture for this**.
 
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 ## Check Wind Rose plot (perspective view)
-Investigate the wind rose in relation to your home. Manipulating a "Perspective" Rhino viewport may be useful here to explore the model. This plot will be revisited in a later module.
+Investigate the wind rose in relation to your home. Manipulating a "Perspective" Rhino viewport may be useful here to explore the model. A wind rose visualizes the wind speed and direction at a specific location. This plot will be revisited in a later module.
 
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 ## Check Sun Path (perspective view)
-Investigate the sun path in relation to your home. Manipulating a "Perspective" Rhino viewport may be useful here to explore the model. This plot will be revisited in a later module.
+Investigate the sun path in relation to your home. Manipulating a "Perspective" Rhino viewport may be useful here to explore the model. A sun path diagram shows the sun's path through the sky at a specific loacation. This plot will be revisited in a later module.
 
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